A possible working thesis for my paper is: Big data is both positively and negatively affecting an already hot topic in the United States: health care, and it’s accessibility to citizens. My sources include an article written by Bernard Marr and it is titled ” How Big Data Is Changing Healthcare”, and it was published on April 21, 2015, so it is a reliable and relevant to the current times. Another source I am using is a scholarly article titled “Big Data: Embracing Data to Transform Healthcare and Pharma Commercial Strategy” that was written by a team that goes by the name of Bharat Brook Bureau and was published in January 2017.
My plan is to continue researching and begin organizing some brain storming methods.
How are these sources relevant to your thesis, what are they about? What can big data do about health care’s accessibility to people- I don’t understand what your thesis is about or what big data has to do with accessing healthcare other than locations of healthcare offices and hospitals.
Hi, Sarah,
As Kaylin points out, your thesis needs some reworking. Big data and health care accessibility create a focus for your essay, but it may be a little too specific. The Bharat Brook Bureau source seems to reflect a focus on sales strategy rather than accessibility. Let’s talk in class on Tuesday. If your reading has led you to a different thesis, that’s fine, too.
ok thank you, sounds good